Vampires, werewolves, Kevin is stronger than any monster.
But every witch has his day.
Kevin Mishnar is a rare being, even among his own kind. Being a full-blooded witch, heās been hunted by humans and even the supernatural world. With powerful magic, and some help, heās survived every threat.
He has a good job, a wonderful sister, an amazing girlfriend, and great friends. He couldnāt ask for anything more. But when someone close to Kevin gets caught in supernatural chaos, he has to wonder.
Would his loved ones be better off without him?
Alicia Teague has been around the supernatural all her life. Half-demons, ghosts, and vampires. Sheās even dating a witch. When Kevin disappears from her life, sheās left to pick up the pieces. But she canāt leave the supernatural behind, even if she wanted to.
Her brother wants her help with the family business.
From the Damned and Cursed Series
What Do The Readers Say?
I caught this series in the middle with this book. I am impressed that I have been able to follow all the action and understand the importance of each character despite not having followed them before now. That demonstrates really excellent plotting and descriptive writing. Only work of that quality would allow me to move forward so easily with the story. Really well done. I am looking forward to going back to the beginning to see what I've missed.
Kindle Customer
Amazon Review
Have been reading this series since the start and loved it right off the bat. I think I've pretty much read them all in one go when they come out. I really love the characters and their unique personalities. I enjoy getting to see several different point of views from different books but they all still tie together making a bigger world. I really enjoy this Authors work and can't wait for the next book. Hopefully it isn't too long a wait!
Philip Karl Hayward Jr
Amazon Review
Soooo good. Lots of action. Quite a few surprises. Interesting expansion of the witch and what goes on there. Unexpected peril and amazing development arc. Please, please, please write another one.
Doug in AZ
Amazon Review
Care for a sample? Or maybe some trivia?
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Chapter 1
Vanilla extract.Ā A slice of lemon.Ā Tapioca pudding.Ā Minced garlic.
The common household kitchen items were spread across a long folding table.Ā A pot of boiling water sat on an electric hot-plate to the side, its bubbling the only sound in the basement.Ā Each item was treated with the utmost care and respect, separated and organized, as if they were the components to a bomb.
From the eye of the young man staring at them, that was a real possibility.
Kevin Mishnar let out a deep sigh, one of many over the past twenty minutes.Ā He stood and paced.Ā This was the part of magic that he hated the most.
The waiting.
It took three weeks for the four items to come to him.Ā The lemon was first.Ā It popped in his head while at work, as he fixed a computer for the bossās daughter.Ā Ā The pudding and garlic came when he was cooking dinner.Ā Only the vanilla extract had an amusing story behind it.
It popped while he was with his girlfriend, Leese, in the early hours of the morning.Ā They were together, doing what young couples did, when the ingredient came to him.Ā If Leese wasnāt a wonderful girlfriend, Kevinās muttering of vanilla extract while she ground her hips into his might have been a mood killer.
But Leese knew Kevin was a witch, and knew about the strangeness that came with it.
Like sometimes obsessing over half completed potions.
He glared at the folding table.Ā It had been another three weeks since the extract came to him.Ā He didnāt understand how magic worked, at least with new potions.Ā They just happened.Ā Sometimes a single potion came to him, or a flurry came at once.Ā Sometimes they were quick and easy, others took months.Ā Kevin kept a notepad to jot down every ingredient.Ā He wouldnāt know what the potion did until it was completed.Ā Magic, if nothing else, was a tease.
He turned on some music and sat on the couch.Ā He tried to take his mind off magic.Ā Sometimes focusing on a potion helped it along.Ā But there were times that distraction was the best thing.Ā There was no magic formula.
Kevin admired the basement he called home.Ā He still lived in the house his friend Victoria gifted him.Ā Legally, it belonged to Kristin, his sister.Ā But he was more than happy to claim the basement as his own.Ā A bed, couch, TV, computer, bathroom, he didnāt need more than that.
There were a few other witchās touches as well.
Kicking his feet up on the couch, he surfed through the channels.Ā The allure of seven oāclock television on a Friday night didnāt exactly grab him, and he found himself staring at the table once again.Ā Frustrated, he stood up and turned off the hot-plate.Ā It was another trick he often went to.Ā Sometimes being near boiling water, a catalyst for many potions, would get the magical juices flowing.
But, for the moment, he was impotent.
āSome witch you are,ā he muttered.
He approached his witchās touch, the shelves that took up an entire wall of the basement.Ā The shelves were lined with potions and ingredients.Ā Most came from the kitchen.Ā Kristin would never realize they were missing, since he did all the cooking.Ā Others were more exotic.Ā Flowers from a tomb, preserved owl eyes, bones of a sparrow, bat wings.Ā Kevin didnāt even want to think about what witches in the past used, all while hovering over a cauldron.
His gaze drifted back and forth between his vast array of ingredients and his work table.Ā He wondered if a guess was in order.Ā Some of his favorite potions came from simply guessing at an ingredient or two.Ā Maybe nothing would happen.Ā But that nothing could turn into inspiration for another ingredient, or even another potion.Ā Sometimes just the act of brewing a potion led to more.
Or something crazy could happen, but he tried not to think about that.
He went to his go-to ingredient.Ā Sugar.Ā He poured a pinch into his palm and went to work.Ā Turning the hot-plate back on, he mixed the ingredients.Ā Vanilla extract.Ā A slice of lemon.Ā Tapioca pudding.Ā Minced garlic.Ā A pinch of sugar.Ā All in boiling water.Ā The garlic threw a mouth-watering aroma through the basement, making him hungry.Ā His finger hovered over the bubbling mixture.Ā Every magical potion needed the touch of a witch.Ā With a quick stir, he would either have something new to write in his witchās journal, or a blistered finger.
āLetās see what we got.ā
He stirred the mixture quickly.Ā It didnāt change color, nor did his finger burn.
āHmm, wow.Ā I wonderāā
A loud popping sound interrupted, followed by a cloud of smoke attacking him.Ā He stepped back and waved frantically, trying to clear the air.Ā The smoke refused to give in.Ā A coughing fit seized Kevin, and a moment later the basement was full of smoke.Ā He could see nothing.Ā He almost tripped over the couch trying to put distance between himself and the ruined potion.
The smoke alarm went off.
āShit.ā
āKevin!āĀ It was Kristin, shouting from upstairs.Ā Kevin heard the basement door open.Ā āWhatās going on?Ā Is there a fire?ā
He peered through the smoke.Ā He felt no heat, saw no flames dancing from his work table.Ā No fire, it was just another potion gone bad.
āNo, everything is cool.Ā Itās just, uhā¦.ā
āDamnit, Kev,ā she said.Ā He heard her moving down the stairs.Ā āYouāve got to stop doing this.Ā Last month, you almost burned the house down.ā
āI did not.āĀ He stumbled to the corner and felt for his reading glasses on the desk.Ā With another sigh, he slipped them on.Ā āItās just a little smoke.Ā Not that big a deal.Ā Iāve seen worse when you try to cookāā
His eyes went wide as he trailed off.Ā Wearing a simple pair of reading glasses allowed him to see through anything, and that included smoke.Ā Kristen was three feet away from the hot-plate, waving her hand in front of her.
āWatch outā!ā
It was too late.Ā She wore a black dress, and slammed into the table with her leg.Ā The failed, boiling potion spilled all over the carpet, and her bare skin.Ā Kristin screamed as she fell to one knee.Ā Kevin heard the sick sound of her thigh and hand sizzling.
She called his name.Ā Kevin sprang into action.Ā He jumped over the cord to the hot-plate and landed at Kristinās side.Ā She trembled as the pain locked every muscle.Ā He gripped her arm and urgently pulled Kristin to her feet.
āOw!ā she hissed, sucking in a breath of air.Ā āShit!ā
Kevin urged her up the stairs, keeping a hand on her back.Ā Kristin half walked, half stumbled.Ā The smoke filled the stairwell, making both of them cough.Ā She nearly fell forward once, but Kevin caught her.Ā He helped her out of the basement and into the hallway.Ā The kitchen was just ahead.Ā He set her at the dining table and opened the fridge.Ā Her burns were already starting to blister.
Kristin cried quietly behind him.
āHold on,ā he said.
He had fought vampires, werewolves, demons.Ā Retrieving a bottle of water should have been easy.Ā Hearing his sister fight pain made his hand shake.
āI am holding on,ā she said.Ā Her voice dripped with sarcasm.Ā āJust take your time.ā
He created the first potion he ever discovered, long before he knew he was a witch.Ā All he needed was water and the touch of a finger.Ā The bottle of water turned bright blue before losing its color.
Kristin took a deep drink.
Kevin watched her and waited for the magic to happen.Ā The blisters on her thigh slowly vanished.Ā She flexed her hand, but it was still a deep shade of red.
āDrink a little more.ā
āI am.Ā Just wait.ā
One more drink.Ā Kristin rubbed her leg with her injured hand.Ā Her color returned to normal.Ā She turned her palm over in front of her and wiggled her fingers.
She stared at her brother.Ā They were adopted, not biologically related, but that didnāt matter.Ā They loved and looked out for each other.Ā If it wasnāt for Kristin, Kevin wouldnāt be the person he was.Ā She worked hard to take care of them after their parents died.
But like any brother and sister, they fought.Ā He knew just from a look when she was angry with him.
As she sat in silence, Kristin gave him that look.
To add more fuel to her fire, the smoke alarms throughout the rest of the house went off as well.Ā Kevin winced as Kristin covered her ears.Ā Smoke made its way to the kitchen.Ā He ran to the cabinets and started gathering ingredients.Ā Flour, vinegar, sugar, an empty Cool-Whip bowl to contain the smoke.Ā A few drops of water from the sink.
He quickly mixed the potion in the bowl and gave it a stir.Ā Standing in the thick of the smoke, near the basement door, he held the bowl over his head.Ā The smoke pulled in on itself, growing smaller and smaller.Ā It flowed across the couch, the stairs, the carpet, making its way toward Kevin and the magical container.Ā It flowed up his body, and he had to cover his mouth to keep from gagging.Ā When the house was finally clear, he slapped the lid shut.
Everything was eerily quiet.Ā The alarms went dead.Ā The only sound was from Kevinās TV, still on in the basement.Ā Kristin kept giving that look.
As if the tension wasnāt thick enough, Kristin jumped when Oscar leapt across the table.Ā She squealed and balled up her fists in shock.Ā Kevinās cat was always either at his side, or waiting in the shadows to frighten someone.Ā Being an all-black feline gave Oscar an advantage.
āOscar!Ā Go away!ā Kristin shouted.
Kevin regarded her for the first time since he heard her come home from work.Ā Confusion set in as he looked her up and down.Ā The black dress she wore stopped just above the knee and showed off her slender shoulders.Ā Heels and makeup, which was ruined due to tears.Ā A light bulb went off in his head, not unlike when he discovered new magic.
āAh,ā he said.Ā āYouāre going on that date with Todd.ā
āNo.Ā I was going on that date with Todd.ā
āWhat?Ā Why are you canceling?ā
āI donāt know.Ā Maybe because I just got burned to a crisp.ā
Kevin felt awful.Ā He didnāt want to be the cause of her not going out on a Friday night.Ā Kristinās social life was improving, but she needed to get out more often.
āBut youāre fine now.ā
Her voice softened a touch as she stood and looked herself over once again, feeling her leg and hand.
āYeah, thanks.āĀ Her hard edge returned.Ā āLook at me.Ā My dress is ruined.Ā And my makeup, I donāt even want to knowāā
He laughed, drawing a glare.
āYouāre right.Ā You donāt want to know.ā
He took the bottle from her and set it on the table.
āJust change,ā he said.Ā āFix your makeup and go out.ā
Finally, she managed a smile.
āI donāt know.Ā Iām afraid youāll blow the house up.ā
āI wonāt.ā
āLet me guess.Ā Your latest potion isnāt quite done.ā
āIāll figure it out.ā
āWell, stop.āĀ She paused as she passed the basement doorway.Ā Her nose wrinkled as she sniffed.Ā āIs that garlic?ā
He ushered her away, toward the stairs by the front door.
āDonāt worry about it.Ā Get ready for your date.ā
āI already did.Ā Once.ā
āGet ready again.Ā Youāve got other dresses.Ā Iāll clean up the basement.Ā Donāt worry.ā
āOkay, okay.Ā Iām going.ā
Kristin was halfway upstairs when she stopped to turn around.Ā She gave him a long look.
āKev,ā she said.Ā āYou donāt have to be a witch all the time.Ā Itās okay to just be a stupid, regular guy.ā
He wasnāt sure of her point, or what she was trying to say.Ā He was a regular guy.Ā He was an assistant IT specialist.Ā He didnāt own a ghost business.Ā Or manage vampire affairs out of a mansion.Ā Or whatever it was Jack Kursed did.
He didnāt know what to say, so just went with humor.
āWell, Iāve got the stupid part down.Ā Go get ready.ā
āIāll do that,ā she said, turning on the stairs.Ā Her voice went quiet as she disappeared to the second floor.Ā āAnd donāt burn the house down!ā
*****
Kevin eyed the carpet with disdain.Ā Heād already said his goodbyes with Kristin, wished her luck, and heard the front door open and close above him.Ā The carpet just behind the couch was sopping wet, and the scent of garlic, while wonderful, wasnāt a good smell for a basement.Ā He put away all his ingredients.Ā Witchcraft was over for the night.
He still carried the container of magically trapped smoke.Ā Heād have to dispose of it later.Ā Setting it on a shelf, a smile crossed his face as he thought of potential uses.Ā It would be a fun prank to play in the bathroom at work.
He grabbed an enchanted sponge off the shelf.Ā Wiping it a single time across the carpet, it absorbed all the moisture, leaving the fabric dry and fresh.Ā He used magic of a different sort for the scent of garlic.Ā A liberal spraying of Febreze.
Satisfied with the cleanup, he turned his attention to the rumbling in his stomach.Ā He wasnāt sure what he enjoyed more.Ā Cooking up potions, or cooking up food.
It didnāt take long to get the kitchen rolling.Ā Kevin was deep in his version of a Friday night out.Ā He liked going out, liked spending time with his friends and family.Ā But he equally enjoyed a night on the couch, with his spell-book in his lap and a black cat on the cushion next to him.
He made plenty of food, in case Kristinās date went badly.Ā Steak smothered in mushrooms, steamed green beans, and baked potatoes.Ā He sampled a mushroom while enjoying the scent of the steak.
āOne day, Jack,ā he said.Ā āYouāll cook like me.ā
He was shooing Oscar off the counter when his phone lit up.Ā After giving up his phone, and using magical stones to communicate, Kevin finally relented and purchased a phone once again.Ā Kevin and Leese both endured too many embarrassing incidents, with Leese even getting in trouble at work, because of their magical communication.Ā Voices booming mysteriously, or Leese hunched over a rock in a corner.Ā Kevin communicated with text, like every other person over eight years old.Ā They saved magic stones for emergencies.
Which, thankfully, there had been none.
He unlocked the phone to see it was a text message from Leese.Ā He smiled as he read the single sentence, what had turned into a private joke between them.
Can I come over and play?
There was no accompanying topless photo.Ā Although he had plenty, Kevin hung his head in disappointment.Ā He could always use more.
He went downstairs to his desk, where he stored countless pictures of places important to him.Ā Victoriaās kitchen, an alley close to work, Alexās house, and Leeseās bedroom.
Some magic was simple, like trapping smoke or cleaning a carpet.Ā Then there was magic that was life-changing.Ā Like granting a human immortality.Ā Or using a picture to travel across the world.
The process had almost become rote.Ā Kevin grabbed a photo of Leeseās bedroom in her apartment, then headed to his shelves.Ā He plucked an already-prepared glass vial from a neatly labeled rack.Ā He drew two circles, or rather portals, using the potion.Ā One on the picture, and another on his basement wall.
Placing the photo inside the drawn portal completed the ritual.
The portal came into being, taking the picture with it.Ā He always kept multiple copies of every picture, for that reason.Ā On one side was Walton, Maryland, Kevinās hometown-tiny-corner-of-paradise.Ā On the other side was Baltimore, home to most of Kevinās friends.
Including his beautiful girlfriend.
Even after a hard day at the veterinarianās office, Leese was radiant.Ā Kevin realized he was biased, but she never had trouble turning heads.Ā She still wore her scrubs.Ā Her blond hair was short, only barely long enough to make a ponytail.Ā Her skin was flawless.Ā He always wondered what magic she possessed to have a tan throughout the year.
Her smile was genuine, but weary.Ā Fresh clothes and a purse were slung over her shoulder.Ā A pair of jeans and a blouse.Ā He couldnāt help but notice the lacy underwear.
āHi, sexy.ā
āHey, yourself.ā
He stepped aside for her to cross the portal.Ā He took her hand so she wouldnāt trip.Ā Leese was gorgeous, smart, sweet, and kind.Ā She was equally as clumsy.
Her nose wrinkled as Kevin closed the portal behind her.
āWhat is that?ā
He laughed.
āGarlic and Febreze.āĀ The thought of garlic made him think of dinner, still on the stove.Ā āShit.ā
He ran up the stairs.Ā Leese followed, smiling and laughing.Ā He turned the stove off and quickly shuffled food around.Ā Despite the hurried panic, nothing burned.
Leese dropped her clothes on the couch and joined Kevin in the kitchen, sitting at the table.
āIs Kristin out?ā
āYeah.Ā On a date.āĀ He looked her up and down.Ā āDonāt you have that dinner with Cindyās parents tonight?ā
She rolled her eyes as she slouched in the chair.
āDonāt remind me.Ā I love them, but Iām so tired.Ā Iām sleeping in till noon tomorrow.Ā You mind if I shower here?Ā Tracy beat me to the bathroom.ā
Kevin laughed.Ā Tracy was Leeseās roommate, and loved her hot showers.
āSure.Ā You want something to eat?Ā Thereās plenty here.ā
āNo, but thanks.Ā Iāll eat at the restaurant.āĀ She had one foot on the basement stairs, and enough energy to blow a flirty kiss.Ā āDonāt peek.ā
āIāll try not to.ā
He enjoyed dinner while listening to Leese shower in the basement.Ā She sang, badly, and it took effort not to choke on his steak with laughter.Ā The bathroom in the basement didnāt have a door.Ā He completely lost it when he heard Leese shouting at Oscar.Ā The cat strolled into the bathroom and scared Leese when he jumped at the curtain.
āKevin!ā she shouted.Ā āCome and get your cat!ā
He set his dirty dishes in the sink and peered into the basement.Ā He hoped Leese couldnāt sense his smile.
āWhat?ā he said.Ā āHe thinks youāre hot.ā
āYouāre supposed to be spying on me.Ā Not Oscar.ā
The slinky cat trotted up the stairs.Ā He stopped at Kevinās feet, just long enough for a quick mew and a scratch behind the ears.
āGood boy, Oscar.ā
*****
Kevin was on the couch watching television when the shower stopped.Ā Leese stepped out wearing only a towel.Ā Heād brought her clothes from upstairs, but she didnāt bother reaching for them.Ā Instead, she joined him.Ā Stretching her lean legs out, she shifted a few times before getting comfortable.Ā He rested a hand on her side as she snuggled her head in his lap.
āSorry if Iām getting you wet.ā
āYou can get me wet whenever you want.ā
āWhat are you doing tonight?ā
āJust what Iām doing now.ā
āYouāre not going to visit Tiffany?ā
He laughed.Ā They both had grown close to Jackās adopted daughter, much to Jackās dismay.
āNot tonight.Ā Jackās been in a bad mood.Ā More than usual.ā
Leese winced at the thought.Ā Jack wasnāt known for his pleasant demeanor.Ā For him to be in an active, noticeable bad mood spoke volumes.
āIs he still mad?ā Leese asked.Ā āAbout Oscar?ā
Kevin cringed as the memory came back.Ā Oscar was a well-behaved cat, but there times he liked to run.Ā He ripped through Jackās home one evening during a visit, while he was cooking dinner.Ā He crashed into a lamp, sprinted over the breakfast bar, knocked plates of food to the floor.Ā Tiffany thought it was hilarious.Ā Jack didnāt.
It was no more damage than Tiffanyās young friends did when they had a sleepover.Ā But Jack always had more patience when it came to Tiffany.
āUh, yeah, heās still mad.Ā He said I should start playing with kids my own age.ā
Leese chuckled so much her towel nearly came undone.Ā She turned on her knees and leaned on Kevin.Ā Her laughter was infectious, and he couldnāt help but join in.
āJackās such an asshole,ā she said.
āI canāt argue that.ā
āBut he is right.Ā You need to play with kids your own age.āĀ She swung her leg over his and straddled him.Ā She nearly fell, but he grabbed her hips to steady her.Ā āIām your age.Ā What do you want to play?ā
He gently tugged at her towel and shifted under her.
āThat depends.Ā How much time do you have before dinner?ā
Leese smiled and leaned closer.Ā She wasted no time in pulling off his shirt.
Their lips had barely touched when the phone in Leeseās purse rang.
They laughed together as she gently cupped his face.Ā He kissed her neck, drawing a squeal, before she bounded off the couch.
āIād better see whatās going on.ā
Kevin stood with her and reached for his shirt on the floor.Ā Leese was too quick, scooping it in one finger as she teased him.Ā She danced across the basement to her purse.Ā Hands on his hips, he admired the peek-a-boo her body was playing with the towel.
Leese checked the phone before answering.Ā Unlike vampires and werewolves, Kevin could only hear her side of the conversation.
āHey, Cindy.Ā Whatās up?āĀ Kevin tried to snatch his shirt, only for Leese to hold it behind her.Ā āIām over Kevinās.Ā You want to say hi?ā
Before Cindy could object, Leese was already tapping at her phone.
āNo.Ā Donāt put it onā¦.āĀ She sighed.Ā āHi, Kevin.ā
He laughed.Ā Like Cindy, he didnāt like group talk over a speaker-phone.Ā That was a big reason Leese always turned it on.
Kevin liked Cindy, Leeseās sister-in-law.Ā She was probably smarter than any of them, a large part of why Alexās business was so successful.Ā Leese and Cindy were sisters long before Cindyās marriage to Alex made it official.
āHi, Cindy.Ā Howās it going?ā
āGood, good.āĀ The awkward conversation continued.Ā āWhat are you up to?ā
āWell, right now Iām trying to get my shirt back from Leese.ā
āOh, Jesus.Ā Sorry I asked.Ā Leese, are you there?Ā Are you even listening?ā
Leese set the phone down to engage Kevin with both hands.Ā They continued to play like children.Ā She stuck her tongue out while pushing him away, moving his shirt about.
āYeah, Iām listening.ā
āIāve been texting you for twenty minutes.ā
āSorry.Ā I just got out of the shower.ā
āCan you make it to dinner earlier?Ā Alex might have a job tonight, and my dad was hoping to make it an early night.ā
Leese adorably pouted, sticking out her lower lip with exaggeration.
āBut I want to play with my boyfriend.ā
āPlay with him tomorrow.ā
āOh, alright.āĀ She shifted to serious as she picked up the phone.Ā āHow early is too early?āĀ She checked the time and ran through routes in her head.Ā āI can be there in twenty minutes.ā
āPerfect.Ā Iāll see you soon.ā
Leese hung up and smiled apologetically.Ā She tucked her phone away as she moved to her clothes.Ā He wasnāt happy their time was cut short, but enjoyed watching her drop her towel, slip into her lacy panties and a pair of jeans.
āAww,ā he joked.Ā āI guess playtime is over.ā
She fastened her bra and approached to take his hand.
āIāll make it up to you.Ā Promise.Ā Hey,ā she said, struck by a thought.Ā āDo you want to come?ā
He smirked at her phrasing.Ā Her cheeks turned red.
āI meant to dinner.Ā Food.Ā Eat.Ā Drink.Ā You know.ā
A touchy subject heād been carefully avoiding.Ā Alex, Cindy, and Leese had known each other all their lives.Ā They were a tight group.Ā Even as close as Kevin liked to think Leese and he had become, there were still things only the Teagues did together.Ā Dinner with Cindyās parents was an example.Ā Cindy put those plans together, and she didnāt invite him.Ā It would have been rude and awkward to invade the Teague familyās space.
āNo, thanks.āĀ He gestured upstairs.Ā āIām going to put food away for Kris, cleanup the kitchen.ā
āOkay.āĀ She leaned in for a quick kiss, but quick turned into a thirty-second embrace.Ā She pulled away just enough to give him that smile of hers.Ā āYou know, an early night means I can come back over.Ā We can continue that game.ā
He slapped her butt.
āMy joystick will be ready.āĀ He winced and shook his head.Ā Smooth was never a word used to describe him.Ā āHoly shit, that sounded terrible.ā
Leese laughed, not deterred in the least.Ā She put on her blouse and straightened it.
āYes, it did.Ā Do I look okay?ā
āBeautiful.ā
Heād told her that countless times, and Leese blushed every single time.Ā She approached the wall and gave it a tap.
āCould you hook me up?ā
āSure.āĀ He retrieved the potion and went to his desk.Ā āDo you know where youāre going?Ā Maybe I can get a picture from the web.Ā Save you a few minutes.ā
āThatās okay.Ā Iād rather drive there.Ā Then I can leave whenever.ā
He plucked out another picture of Leeseās bedroom.
āYou got it.ā
A potion, two portals, and one picture later, Leese kissed Kevin goodbye and approached her bedroom.
She stopped at the mouth of the portal.
āOh, I almost forgot,ā she said, turning to face him.Ā āWe have to talk about something real quick.Ā Something serious.ā
He fought panic.Ā They didnāt normally make small talk around a portal.Ā It would stay open for several minutes, unless he closed it himself.Ā But Leeseās roommate didnāt know about magic, didnāt know about the supernatural world, and she didnāt need to.Ā They were always careful in how they went about getting Leese in and out of her apartment.Ā There was no need to change Tracyās life with a misplaced or mistimed portal.
āOkay,ā Kevin said, leaning toward her bedroom.Ā The door was open leading to the hall, and he could hear the shower still running.Ā āWhatās going on?ā
āListen, uhā¦.ā
Her struggle for words was surprising.Ā She always took the lead in their relationship, always made the first move.Ā If it wasnāt for her approaching him at Alex and Cindyās wedding, they might never have talked.
āMy momās coming to town next week.ā
Heād heard a little about Leeseās mother.Ā She was a lawyer, and a single mother.Ā Always busy, always away.
Kevin waited for the rest, but it didnāt come.Ā He listened once again for Tracy, getting nervous.
āOkay, cool,ā he said.Ā āUh, thatās a good thing, right?Ā I know you havenāt seen her in a while.ā
āYeah.Ā So, do you want to meet her?ā
He didnāt hesitate.
āSure.ā
āI was thinkingā¦maybe we could do dinner or something like that.ā
āGreat,ā he said, smiling as inspiration struck.Ā āI can cook for you guys.ā
āReally?ā
āYeah.āĀ He took her hand.Ā āAre you alright?ā
āMe?Ā Oh, Iām fine.Ā Itās justā¦you know, the meeting-the-parents thing.Ā Some guys run away from that.ā
He laughed at the idea.Ā After everything they both had been through, dinner with Leeseās mother didnāt sound that dangerous.
āJust let me know when.ā
āGood.Ā Awesome.āĀ She backed through the portal, nearly tripping.Ā Kevin caught her.Ā Her smile was bright, energetic, nervous.Ā āItāll be just us.Ā No Alex or Cindy.ā
āItāll be fun.āĀ The shower stopped.Ā Kevin approached the portal and placed his palm near the edge.Ā āYouād better get going.Ā Before Tracy gets nosy.ā
She gestured for one more kiss, across the portal.
āIf dinner gets done early, Iāll send you a text.ā
āTell everybody I said hi.ā
Kevin closed the portal with a drag of his hand.Ā He was alone once again, with only Oscar to keep him company.Ā Oscar settled on the back of the couch, curling into a ball.Ā Kevin scratched behind his ears as he joined him.Ā Goodbyes still felt strange when it came to portals, even after so many of them.Ā There was no driving away, no watching someone leave from a doorway with a wave.Ā There was only a bare wall.Ā The basement felt empty without Leeseās warmth and energy.
He stored the leftovers for Kristin, although she didnāt come home early.Ā He hoped her date was going well, and texted her for confirmation.Ā The simple reply brought a chuckle as he loaded the dishwasher.
Donāt wait up.
He sprawled out on the couch and mindlessly watched television.Ā Oscar curled up at his feet.Ā The hours passed, and he slowly drifted to sleep.
Chapter 2
āKevin.ā
The voice was familiar.Ā Male.Ā It sounded close by.Ā He cracked one eye open to see the television still on, although heād muted it sometime in his journey of sleep.
āKevin?Ā Are you there?āĀ The tone was urgent, worried.
āHuh?Ā What?ā
He sat up to see Oscar still at the foot of the couch.Ā In his sleep-induced confusion, he wondered if Oscar had somehow found the ability to talk.Ā Maybe he sipped at one of his potions. Ā The clock on the nightstand informed him it was after two in the morning.
āKevin.Ā Answer, damnit.ā
The voice finally came to him.Ā He hadnāt heard it in a while.
Alex Teague.
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Every burner on the stove was on. Three of them had various foods. Ground beef, vegetables, macaroni and cheese. The fourth was reserved for magic. Kevin brewed potion after potion, capturing each in glass vials. He placed them carefully in the rack on the table, making sure to be quick. Dinner didnāt need to suffer on account of magic. He stirred the vegetables and went back to brewing another potion. Martha was nearly out of cinnamon, a key ingredient for invisibility. Heād have to chip in more money to replenish her spice cabinet.
Dinner cooled as he turned on her old radio in the corner. Music, magic, and food. The night couldnāt get any more boring. Sitting at the table, he closed his eyes to enjoy the moment. Boring was exactly what he needed.
But he missed Leese.
He wondered what she was doing. Did she miss him? How was work going? Were nights out with the group the same without him? Had she met anyone new?
His thoughts were shaken when a black cat jumped on the table and nearly knocked over the vial rack.
āOscar!ā he said. āBe careful.ā
Oscar spun several times. Before curling into a ball, he shot Kevin a penetrating, green-eyed glare. He collapsed away from Kevin, giving him his back to pet. Kevin understood the meaning clearly.
āYeah, I miss her, too.ā He searched the kitchen. āWhereās Sebastian? Did you beat his ass?ā
Upon hearing his name, Sebastian strolled past and aimed for the water bowl. He paid Kevin no mind. Sebastian liked Kevin, but he made it clear he knew who his master was.
Kevin was in the middle of changing the pot for more magic when the phone rang. He whirled in place, having never heard it ring before. Martha was relatively up to date with technology, but still had a land-line phone on the wall. He felt silly for a moment as he struggled with what to do. Should he answer it? Would an ancient answering machine somewhere else in the house take over?
Maybe it was Leese, trying to get a hold of him?
He tentatively approached and picked up the receiver.
āHello? This is Marthaās house.ā
āIād hope so. You havenāt taken it over yet.ā
He laughed.
āHey, Martha.ā
āYou know, I had to look up my own number. I havenāt had to call it in years.ā
āAre you at the store?ā
āNo. Thatās why Iām calling. What are you doing right now?ā
āMaking dinner.ā He glanced at the vial rack, and his eyes went large. Heād been making potions at such a pace, he didnāt notice how many heād finished. A few more, and heād fill up a one-hundred vial rack. āAnd a couple of potions.ā
āSo, no plans? No hot dates or anything?ā
That made him think of Leese. A lovely image of her popped in his mind, and he shoved it away quickly, before he became a bundle of nerves.
āIām still on break from dating.ā
āGood. Because I need someone to work the store tonight.ā
Kevin laughed, but it was short-lived when Martha didnāt join in.
āYouāre serious?ā
āYeah. Meghanās still there, but sheāll be late to her boyās play if you donāt hurry.ā
āYou said you were working tonight.ā
āSomething came up. Come on, Kevin. Help me here.ā
āBut I donāt know what Iām doing! Iāve never worked at a store before.ā
āItās a cash register.ā Her amused tone wasnāt lost on him. āYou used to work at the mall, right?ā
āWell, yeah. But itās different.ā
āItās not that different. Meghan can give you a quick walk-through before she leaves. Sheās waiting for me to call her back. What do you want me to tell her?ā
He sighed and held the receiver against his forehead. Frustration poked at him. He tried to focus on the positive. Martha was letting him stay with her rent free. Meghan truly was a nice woman, and it would be a pleasure to help her. Working at the store for a few hours would keep his mind off Leese. It was also simple compared to other favors asked of him. If only Victoriaās requests were that simple.
He could also stock up on ingredients.
āTell her Iāll be there in five minutes.ā
āThank you. Youāre really pulling me out of a jam.ā
āNo problem. Iāll put dinner in the fridge.ā
Kevin hung up and immediately got to work. He put fresh food down for the cats, cleaned up the kitchen. Moving slowly and cautiously, he carried the rack of various magical potions to the basement and gingerly set them on a shelf. His coat hung on the arm of the couch. He gave it a smile, realizing itād been a while since heād actually went out, except for a simple trip or two.
His coat was special. A gift from Victoria, heād soaked it in various magic. It was fireproof, would mend from simple tears, had multiple pockets and compartments. It had served him well.
But it was bulky, heavy. Movement wasnāt always easy, and despite his best efforts, organization of vials and ingredients were difficult.
He patted it gently, almost feeling like a farewell. He slung a simple backpack, a work-in-progress, over his shoulder.
One quick goodbye and ear-scratch for Oscar and Sebastian, and Kevin was walking down the street.
The trek to the store was quick. He nodded and greeted several people on the way. The town of Sanders was small, and heād gotten to know quite a few people. Renee and Douglas always jogged together, and gave him a friendly wave as they moved across the road. Mrs. Simone was walking her poodle.
Meghan was already packing up as Kevin stepped into the store. Sheād spotted him in the parking lot and decided to get a head start. There were no customers, which Kevin was thankful for. Meghan lit up the store with a smile as he awkwardly stood at the counter.
āMartha roped you in?ā she asked.
āYeah.ā
āI figured it was only a matter of time. What are you standing over there for? Come back over here.ā
He lifted the hinged counter and leaned against the wall. Setting his backpack on the floor, he watched Meghan continue to gather her belongings.
āThank you so much, Kevin,ā she said. āIf you didnāt show up, I donāt know what Iād do. I canāt just leave the store, but Iāve missed enough of Tommyās stuff.ā
āNo problem at all.ā He looked at the space around him. A cash register he wasnāt familiar with. An old dot matrix printer, which he didnāt know still existed. Mysterious black and white monitors. There would indeed be problems. āI can handle this.ā
āThank you so much,ā she gave him a quick hug, catching him by surprise. Meghan began pointing at various objects and talking. It took a few seconds for Kevin to realize she was training him. āThe security cameras are there, there, and there. The monitors are here. Pretty much everything is covered, but you should watch out for the back right corner. Not that many people try to steal, but it happens. Donāt forget to take the trash out before you lock up. Did Martha give you a key?ā
āUh, no.ā
āReally? Hmm, I guess sheāll stop by before the nightās over.ā
He felt more and more like he was falling into a trap he couldnāt climb out of. He didnāt even know where Martha was.
āYeah, one can hope.ā
āDonāt forget to count out the drawer. The safeās in the back, near Marthaās office.ā
He was at least familiar with the safe. Heād seen it before. But counting out a drawer was another mystery.
āGot it.ā
Meghan was still talking as she headed for the door. Kevin laughed and shook his head, giving her a wave. He heard nothing she said. He watched her slide into her car and drive away.
The store was eerily quiet. All he could do was hope for not too many customers and not to make himself look like an idiot.
After more than an hour, his hopes were coming true. It was a slow night. He had the store all to himself. The biggest challenge was battling boredom. He decided to do a little light shopping himself, and browsed the aisles to pick out things he needed. There was still a lot of magic to brew, much work to be done. He spent some nights in Marthaās basement making potions, the ones that didnāt need heat. Mix, touch, and pour into a vial. Sometimes, he thought the routine would overwhelm him.
He hoped all the work was worth it.
It wasnāt until almost nine oāclock when the first customer walked in. The bell jingled, and Kevin tried to peer over the shelves to get a glimpse. He caught a head of light red hair, more like strawberry blonde, just above the cans of dog food. Kevin put back the bag of sugar and walked quickly to the front.
āIām here,ā he announced. āDonāt want you to think the store is empty. How areā?ā
He froze when he saw her. The woman was picking through the shelves for a bottle of water. An overwhelming sense of familiarity struck again. It was the same woman he saw when he first arrived at Marthaās house. She was dressed very casual, in a pair of gray sweatpants and a white tee shirt. Her shape was fit and trim, a runnerās body. As beautiful as she was, it wasnāt her looks that tied his tongue and locked his gaze.
Kevin knew heād met her somewhere before.
āIām fine, thanks,ā she said, guessing the rest of his question. āDo you have any ice? I donāt see it up here.ā
āYeah,ā he said, nodding. āIn the back.ā
He watched her as she retrieved a bag and approached the counter. Her inventory was simple. A bottle of water, a bag of ice, and a candy bar.
āDo I know you?ā
She paused a moment before setting down the rest of her items. A sly smile crossed her face.
āNot the best line. And I might be a little old for you. But Iām flattered.ā
āLine?ā He shook his head. āNo. No, no. Iām not hitting on you.ā
āThatās what they say when the line fails.ā
āIām not, I swear. I just thoughtā¦.ā He decided there was no point. āLetās just get you going, here.ā
He grabbed the scanner and waved it over the bar-code. Nothing happened. Staring at the register, nothing jumped out that seemed useful. He scanned once again. No price came up on the register, there was no noise. He wasnāt even sure what was supposed to happen. Despite the circumstances, he tried not to smile. All the powerful magic in the world couldnāt help him figure out a cash register.
āWhatās wrong?ā she asked.
He repeated the question with a sarcastic laugh.
āWhatās wrong. Whatās wrong is I got talked into helping someone, and I couldnāt be more lost.ā
She laughed.
āI can relate to that.ā She moved around the counter. āLetās see what we can do.ā
Kevinās jaw dropped as she joined him behind the register. He glanced at the monitors, to see if one was pointed at him. He didnāt read the company handbook, but was sure it was against the rules for customers to make themselves at home behind the counter.
āOh, wow,ā she said, eyeing the cash register. āThis is an old system. Havenāt seen one of these in a long time. Hit that button there to get the scanner working.ā
He followed her instructions. She reached for the scanner and rung up her own items.
āOkay. This button here marks the end of sale.ā
The register popped open. Kevin had a terrible thought of her grabbing the money and running, but she didnāt. She pulled a ten-dollar bill from her sock, counted out her change, and shut the register.
āSee? Not that hard.ā
āWow. Thanks.ā
āSure.ā
She circled the counter and retrieved her items. Flashing a smile, she moved to the door.
āOh, hey.ā She turned. āDo I know you?ā
Kevin laughed at the joke, and the stranger left without another word. She didnāt get in a car, but walked down the street. She drew second glances from all sides as she disappeared into the distance.
If only all the customers were that pleasant.
Not long after, two men stopped in, and Kevin was almost sure heād have to call the police. They were loud and obnoxious, playing catch with a roll of toilet paper across the aisles. Twenty minutes passed without them buying anything, and Kevin wondered what their goal was, besides killing time. He watched the monitors closely, but they made no move to steal anything.
It was only when they harassed an elderly customer did he lose his patience.
A woman with a cane was buying medicine when the two men approached her from behind. One placed his head on her shoulder, nearly making her fall.
āHey there, Grandma. You looking for a date?ā
āAre you kidding me? She needs a pacemaker, not a date.ā
One of them bumped into her as she reached into her purse. It was only a quick grab from Kevin across the counter that kept her from tumbling.
āAre you okay?ā he asked.
The woman managed a nod, but held onto the counter with both hands. Kevinās anger boiled over as he looked up.
āWhy donāt you two get the fuck out of here?ā
The smiles turned into snarls.
āOr what? We kind of like it here.ā
Kevin reached behind him and plucked a vial from one of the pockets of his backpack. By the time he turned around, the men were already nearly to the door. They thought he had a gun. While the potion he picked was non-lethal, two hours of intense hallucinations caused by the deepest fears could certainly rival a flesh wound. They were halfway across the parking lot when he opened the door and cocked his arm. Rational thought took over, and he thought it best not to chuck magic at two morons for all to see.
He turned to check on the elderly woman.
āAre you okay?ā
She nodded with a deep breath and shook her head sadly.
āThe worldās just not a safe place anymore.ā
āWas it ever safe?ā
She gestured to the door.
āDanny and Matt. Youāll never find one without the other.ā
āYou know those two dickheads?ā
āMy granddaughter used to date one of the dickheads.ā
Kevin laughed and looked her over. She didnāt seem hurt, only frustrated.
āYou want me to walk you to your car?ā
āNo, thank you. Forget what Danny said. I really donāt need a date.ā
He walked her to her car anyway.
*****
Kevin groaned in frustration as he called Martha for the fourth time, only to listen to her voicemail. It was ten minutes after eleven. Heād flipped the sign on the door to announce they were closed. He also locked the door from the inside.
That was all.
He had no idea what to do. He didnāt have a key to truly lock up. Unlocking anything was easy for a witch, but he still needed a key if he wanted to lock the door from the outside. There was an alarm panel near Marthaās desk in the back, which he didnāt know how to activate. All he could do was call Martha, and she wasnāt answering the phone.
He did find a sheet of emergency contact numbers under the counter. He didnāt know how long itād been since it was updated. Marthaās name and number was on top. Meghan was listed, but her number had been changed. Another number was from an employee Kevin recognized as being fired over a year ago. Apparently, he was stealing from the register.
Pacing back and forth, he tried to think of options. He could lock the store from the inside, then simply create a portal leading to the back alley. But the alarm wouldnāt be set. There was also the matter of the drawer. Was he supposed to leave all the money inside?
He called for a fifth time, and nearly slammed the store phone down when she didnāt answer. Her voicemail greeted him once again.
āMartha, itās Kevin.ā It was a challenge to watch his tone. āIām still here at the store. Iād like to get out of here sometime tonight, so please, call me back. Tell me what to do, what the alarm code is, whatever you want me to do. Thanks.ā
Sighing, he made a round through the store and gathered the trash. He dragged the three bags behind him into the back, past Marthaās office, to the rear door. His nose wrinkled as the scent struck him. The back alley behind the store didnāt smell good. The scent of garbage was strong, making him hold his breath a moment. Holding the door open with one hand, he tossed one bag into the garbage bin, not wanting to get any closer than necessary. He grabbed the second bag and prepared for the light throw.
From around the back side of the door, someone grabbed his arm.
The breath rushed out of him in shock as he was thrown off balance. He dropped the bag, stumbling. Just when he thought heād regained his footing, someone shoved him from behind. He tumbled into the garbage bin. He got his hands up, but still took a nasty hit to his head. Turning onto his back, his vision cleared up just enough to see the shoe bury in his stomach.
āGet the door!ā
āItās shut, man! Itās locked.ā
āI told you to grab it.ā
āNo. You told me youād get it, while I beat the shit out of this asshole.ā
āThatās not what I said!ā
Kevin wiped his eyes and peered above him. Danny and Matt argued near the back door. Matt yanked on the handle a few times, then screamed in frustration and kicked the wall.
āI told you we should have hit it when we were in there!ā
They turned their attention to Kevin. Dannyās brow furrowed in anger. He lashed out with another kick, this one catching Kevin in the chest. They hoisted him to his feet and slammed him against the wall.
āUnlock the door.ā
A trickle of blood ran down Kevinās cheek. His chest hurt, and it was difficult to breathe. Despite everything, he laughed. The entirety of his bad night revolved around a door and a lock.
āI donāt have a key.ā
āBullshit. Donāt fuck with me.ā
āIām serious. No key. Anyway, look at the door. Thereās no keyhole. Thereās no way to get in from out here. You two arenāt very smart, are you?ā
The insult made him feel like Jack Kursed, but only for a moment. Unlike Jack, Kevin felt pain. Another punch to the stomach, and another to the face. They threw him to the ground again. Matt pulled a knife from his waistband, and for the first time, Kevin was afraid. Pushing around old women was one thing, but were they capable of stabbing someone? Murdering someone?
He left his backpack in the store. His confidence returned when he felt the stone in his pocket. His eyes fell on the trash next to him. Some magical quartz and random garbage was more than enough to deal with two humans.
āYouāre going to let us in through the front. Or Iāll cut you open.ā
Kevin clutched his stone and prepared for a fight. It turned out he didnāt need to.
The growl froze everyone in the alley, including Kevin. It came from the shadows behind Danny and Matt, low and deep. The two thugs turned. Kevin pulled himself to one knee, but the pain in his chest wouldnāt let him stand any further. The growl went on an uncomfortably long time. Any thoughts that it was a stray dog were already gone.
āWhat is that?ā Matt asked.
āGo over there and find out.ā
āFuck you.ā
Danny grabbed a rock from the ground and tossed it into the darkness.
āGet out of here!ā
The growl shifted, the cadence changed. It was unlike anything Kevin had ever heard before. He finally realized what it was.
The animal was laughing.
Slowly, the creature emerged from the shadows. Massive, powerful legs. Dark fur. Saliva dripped from a pair of deadly fangs. Terrible memories rushed back. Kevin hadnāt seen one since first learning he was a witch.
The werewolf searched the faces of Danny and Matt. That simple gesture brought a sense of dread. There was intelligence behind its eyes. He knew how dangerous werewolves were when they didnāt know they could think. One that could plot and plan was terrifying.
āWhat the fuckā?ā
That was all Matt could say before the beast was on top of him. It closed the distance and ripped a claw across his chest before he could say four words. Matt stumbled against the wall. He tried to fight back with his knife, but the wolf caught his wrist in its jaws and clamped down. Matt shouted as muscle and tendon were shredded.
Danny jumped on its back, but that helped very little. The wolf shook violently, throwing the small man through the air. Danny and Matt stumbled as they scurried away, not looking behind them. The wolf didnāt chase.
It turned its attention to Kevin.
He stood defensively, his hand still on his stone. The other hand clutched at his throbbing ribs. Without more magic, he was defenseless, but didnāt worry. The werewolf wasnāt there to hurt him, or it would have already ripped his throat out.
āThank you,ā he said. āDo Iā¦know you?ā
The werewolf let out a tiny yelp and fell on its side. Kevin thought it was hurt for a moment, until it began to change. He winced as he heard the sound of bones breaking. Fur shriveled into skin, and the tone turned lighter. He recognized a pair of female legs, and it finally clicked. Embarrassment settled in from not recognizing her earlier. Heād only met her once, and sheād worn a blanket with her face covered in blood. But he heard enough about her that he felt like he knew her well.
The woman rested on one knee, keeping her head low. She was adjusting to her new shape and catching her breath.
āMarie.ā
Marie Johnson lifted her chin and smiled. Standing upright, she stretched her arms, and more bones cracked and popped. She was completely naked, her figure exposed for all the world to see. Kevinās cheeks turned red as he caught an inadvertent eyeful. He dropped his gaze to the ground, only keeping her bare feet in view.
āDo I know you,ā she repeated. āThatās the second time you asked that tonight.ā
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March 24, 2017 @ 1:05 pm
Ah, you slipped this one in without me seeing it. I eagerly await the excerpt.
March 26, 2017 @ 10:25 am
Cant wait…looking forward to it.
March 29, 2017 @ 7:18 pm
It’ll be great, but it’s strange to see Kevin so uncertain and insecure.
March 29, 2017 @ 9:34 pm
Uncertain and insecure? He came off that way?
March 30, 2017 @ 3:56 am
I agree with Nathan Smith – Kevin does sound a little bit uncertain when he was trying to figure out that potion, but it’s realistic, no one is sure of themselves all the time!
March 30, 2017 @ 6:51 am
Hmm I guess that’s on purpose then, which I’ll take. š I just wanted to get across his love for making magic, the time and effort (and indeed uncertainty) that went into making something.
I don’t think he’s too insecure anyore. That comes across in his relationship with Leese. There will be plenty of issues for him to work through in this one.
October 17, 2017 @ 5:19 pm
No one is sure of themselves EVERY TIME?… Except Jack Kursed… LOL and he’d be the first to rag on Kevin for being so indecisive and unsure!! š
March 30, 2017 @ 3:56 am
Love it, can’t wait for it to be published!
March 30, 2017 @ 11:25 pm
Thank you for posting the sneak peak. I loved everything from the point Kevin starts cooking dinner in the kitchen. Your characters are compelling, and you are a genius with natural sounding dialogue. I will definitely be buying the finished book!
I had some questions during the first scene in the basement. If Kevin is the most dangerous being on the planet, and if he doesn’t have any clue what adding a random ingredient to a spell will create, would he really take that chance in his sisters’ house, especially while she is at home? And, if Kristin is the strong, intelligent woman and klutz we know her to be, would she walk into smoke that could do any number of perilous magical things to her, especially when she can’t see? She knows Kevin is ok, so it doesn’t make her look very smart. (Sorry!) Then, when she gets a littly grouchy about the situation after she is injured, it feels just a bit unreasonable.
I could be wrong, but the first scene seems to exist mainly to make the reader realize that Kevin struggles with creating his spells. Wouldn’t that be more dramatic if he were under pressure? If there were some kind of time constraint and/or high stakes, we would feel his frustration so much more. As it is, the ingredient conundrum goes on long enough that it seems to delay the action too much. That is, the ingredient delay creates a passive beginning. Once Kevin gets to the kitchen, things start hopping!
Please take my musings with a 5lb. bag of salt. I read and help revise scripts for film students as part of my job, but that certainly doesn’t guarantee that I’m right. At the very least, please know everything I wrote above was meant with deepest respect and a genuine desire to help tighten up what promises to be another fantastic novel.
March 31, 2017 @ 8:20 am
Hmm passive beginning. I’ll have to maybe tackle this beginning with a new eye. š Perhaps I stretched it on too long. Believe it or not, as you might be able to tell how the excerpt ended, action is already right around the corner. But maybe I took too long getting there.
Chapter one, for me, is a little reminder of who Kevin is. He loves magic, is relatively simple at heart. Doesn’t party much, loves his small family. His basement “library” of magic has grown.
Oh, Alex Teague is looking for him. š
May 31, 2017 @ 6:15 pm
Now, see, I didn’t get that from the teaser at all. It all seemed very…hrm…fitting, I’d guess. Kevin hasn’t had a whole lot of `teaching’ in the witch business, and most of his previous potions/spells have come to him out of the blue without clear idea of what exactly that particular potion does. Other times, he’s trying for a certain result (Jack’ curse?) and winds up with something else….possibly related, but not exact. This scene gave me, at least, insight into his creative process, not unlike the couple paragraphs in Witch’s Kurse. As for Kristin, we haven’t seen enough of her to know anything solid. She has been Kevin’s older sister/caretaker for a long while and is very devoted to him. I don’t see her hesitating when the possibility that Kevin might be in danger is in the wind…or the spellpot, as the case may be. `Knowing’ someone is okay is far different from believing it, and I thought her actions/portrayal went a long way toward showing their bond. Again, we haven’t *seen* much of her since Witch To Live, she just kinda dropped through the cracks, and for me, it was great seeing they still have a very close bond. And as anyone with a close bond with another person can tell you, sometimes the person you’re bonded with is a friggen thoughtless idiot who probably deserves a cuff ’round the ear every third hour. Doesn’t mean you don’t love them; you probably see it all the (relative) time. How many times have we seen a kid fall off a swingset or something, the Mom rush over to rescue him/her, and when assured they’re really okay, grump at them about being careful and why don’t they *think* and blah-blah-blah.
Which is why, incidentally, I love Glenn’s books. The relationships don’t feel forced or clichĆ©d as they develop, change, and are expressed. Alex and Leese are believable as brother/sister; Alex and Cindy are believable as disgustingly sappy-happy newlyweds/soulmates/lifepartners/whatever term you want to use. Jack and Tiffany are believable; Jack and Kevin are believable. This excerpt shows me Kevin and Kristin are believable, too. I, for one, think it’s a great beginning, but that and five bucks will buy you a coffee at Starbuck’s.
March 31, 2017 @ 1:14 pm
I don’t know if my thoughts are of any use to you, or not, and I should preface by saying that I loved the excerpt, regardless, but I had a similar reaction to that beginning. I immediately became tense when I read it. Victoria warned Kevin that the Black Death was created by a witch who had good intentions and explained why he was hunted under “kill on sight” orders. He experienced all of that along with the threats to his family and promised not to do anything terrible, and, yet, here he took a terrible risk for no other reason than to satisfy his curiosity. It just felt careless on his part, but, of course, carelessness can be a great motivator for a story. I assumed that was the point.
April 2, 2017 @ 12:30 pm
I find myself wishing that I could retract my earlier statement. First impressions are not always the best ones, and I didn’t really think that it started too slow. I found myself cringing at Kevin’s dangerous experimentation, but if that’s the type of person he is, then that’s what he should do.
April 1, 2017 @ 9:59 pm
Excellent teaser chapter.
I really liked it.
I had been wondering if kevin would get involved with alex’s business, he is still sort of weak career wise.
He needs income if he will marry leese, which he should be thinking about this time of the relationship.
Really like these characters, love the series.
April 12, 2017 @ 11:57 pm
I suggest he invests in magical fortification, it seems that home attacks are relatively common, and portals could be concealed with individualy keyed defenses, not only that but the ability to isolate spell effects would come in handy in similiar situation’s and if he could use a magical conducter to avoid directly touching a deadly spell, or perhaps get an idea of a spell by thinking about a particular experimental sequence without the risk of creating a mystical nuke.
April 20, 2017 @ 8:41 am
You’re on the right track. š That’s all I’ll say on that point for now. š
June 6, 2017 @ 3:26 am
Looks great.. waiting for the release
August 27, 2017 @ 10:28 pm
As always that excerpt just made me want to read more. You sir hace a real gift. I’m looking forward to this. Can’t wait.
December 31, 2017 @ 8:22 pm
Iām so excited now! Cannot wait to get my hands on this one!
January 10, 2018 @ 1:47 pm
I am dying for this book to come out! š I check your site every few months to check on it! I enjoyed all the books immensely!
March 9, 2018 @ 5:15 am
Oh man! I’m pretty sure I’ve been checking for news on this book daily since the first excerpt came out and this second one might force me into twice daily territory. Really looking forward to reading this book!! I’ve already re-read the rest of the series to prepare, but I think I’ll have to do so one more time. : )
March 10, 2018 @ 1:08 am
Wow.. The new excerpt made it impossible to wait for the new book. Well you revealed your “guest star”, i think. It would have been nice to keep it a surprise Looking forward for the book. Would love to be part of beta reading if possible..
March 10, 2018 @ 7:37 am
Ha I know. š Now you’ve got me wondering if I should take it out. Many readers guessed it, though, and I figured I wasn’t hurting any of the story with the reveal.
March 12, 2018 @ 1:35 pm
Strong beginning, looks great! Can’t wait to read the rest of the book, may go back and re-read the whole series while I wait. Keep up the good work!
March 17, 2018 @ 12:55 pm
Any release date yet for Witch Trial? going to reread series before next book is out.
March 18, 2018 @ 7:47 pm
Where we’re at now is at the end of Chapter 9 for editing. At this pace, only a few more days before editing is done.
Then it’s reader feedback, or what I call beta. Make sure it all makes sense to a select few before I put it out for sale. š
March 24, 2018 @ 5:41 pm
Glenn your an amazing writer im grateful and excited for your next book and thank you for you increased feedback!
March 26, 2018 @ 8:16 am
Thank you much, really appreciate it. š
March 30, 2018 @ 11:55 am
I am eagerly awaiting the release of this one. Kevin is one of my favorite characters!
April 5, 2018 @ 1:10 pm
Great anticipation. Looking forward to this release.
April 18, 2018 @ 8:52 am
Any news on the release???
April 18, 2018 @ 7:55 pm
I’m hoping any day now. Just waiting on two readers to get back to me.
April 19, 2018 @ 8:31 am
Great cant wait Kevin is my Favorite Character in your series by far
April 24, 2018 @ 4:02 am
The book was great. I’m so excited about everything that happened. I love the everything, the character devolpment the action and the ending. I’m super excited to read it again in the next few weeks maybe after I reread the rest of the series again. I really can’t wait to find out where the story goes next, you’ve set up such a wonderful world with a great cast of characters. Great work I look forward to reading your next book!
April 24, 2018 @ 6:31 am
Whoa, it’s out already? And you read it? I’d better get to posting some links.