Broken Home – New Description
Hey guys. Need a little assistance. Broken Home is more challenging than I thought. 🙂 Check out this altered description, that will eventually go with the piece, and let me know what you think. Just general impression, and what you might think it’s about. 🙂
Here goes:
Even a demon has a beginning.
The year is 1973. Janet Fields is living the stereotypical American Dream. She has a loving husband, two wonderful daughters, and a beautiful home away from the hustle of city life. Life couldn’t be any better.
That changed the day the stranger invaded her home, and tore apart not only everything Janet knew about her life, but also the world around her.
November 20, 2014 @ 8:38 pm
It certainly sounds interesting! Is this going to be another part of the Damned and Cursed series?
November 20, 2014 @ 9:03 pm
Does a good job of introducing the main character from the story and gives a hint of what the ending is about and the kids. Could be a good description.
November 21, 2014 @ 5:48 am
Mentioning the demon and the year gives clues as to where this is going. It’ll be interesting to see if folks get the connections.
November 21, 2014 @ 6:57 am
I’m lost and can’t imagine what it’s about… But I want to read it!! Lol
November 21, 2014 @ 10:08 am
Peeks my interest. Makes me want to read more.
November 21, 2014 @ 10:21 am
Prequel perhaps?? – Maybe/Maybe not – looking forward to it:)
November 21, 2014 @ 12:05 pm
That name, Fields, suddenly sounds awfully familiar.